Different Word by Alan Walker
The line that I like is, "This is not the world we had in mind." Because it means a lot and there's a deep meaning behind that line. The song tells us about the wicked doing happening on earth. On how we suffered too much and loss our love one's. The song also implies that we shouldn't just sit and die, but we should acquire actions and even if we fail, we still have time as long as we are breathing.
a good topic sentence is clear and easy to follow.
the confusing sentence structure and unnecessary vocabulary bury the main idea, making it difficult for the reader to follow the topic sentence. stronger example: most forms of writing can be improved by first creating an outline.